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Musa at the window

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art by me : *analadygaga ;)
Original character "Musa" by © Iginio Straffi
glitter brush by : *redheadstock
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2000x3036px 5.29 MB
© 2011 - 2024 ana-happy
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Instead of a comment, you will get a critique :3 I hope that it won't be too harsh, as it's first time I'm writing one.

First of all, Musa looks fabulous. She is really pretty and I am very happy that you choose the winx transformation, it gives a more dynamic touch than for example Enchantix would do. The winx transformation gives this mix of an old-styled, but energic feeling, if that makes any sense XD So basically, I love this idea <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" title="Love"/>

Anatomy wise, she looks great as well. Those legs must have been hard to draw because of the perceptive, and I admire you for doing it. I think that you should work a bit with your shoulders, as they are quite wide compared to the female anatomy (trust me, I have the same problem). Female shoulders should be as wide as their hips or even a bit less. I also think that you should try to make some more space between the eyes, as that space should be about as wide as the width of one eye. Otherwise I think that she looks super lovely :3

A last thing I will comment on is the way you made the wall. Those look like real bricks and the perspective in the window is just perfect <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
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